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　　2021年11月21日托福寫(xiě)作回憶和解析含范文  本文由培頓 教育北京學(xué)校王辰老師整理提供，本次托福寫(xiě)作綜合點(diǎn)評(píng)：綜合部分是一道15年的老題，難度不大。獨(dú)立部分是今年家考真題，難度較大。

　　綜合寫(xiě)作

　　話題分類歷史類

　　考題回憶總論點(diǎn)Mary Celeste船上的人員消失的原因。

　　閱讀部分閱讀給出三個(gè)原因：

　　1. 被海盜劫持了。

　　2. 船上載著桶裝的易燃液體，易燃液體泄露。因?yàn)楹ε卤ǎ瑔T逃到救生艇上，然后遭遇了事故。

　　3. 船有沉沒(méi)的危險(xiǎn)，他們棄船逃生。

　　聽(tīng)力部分1. 沒(méi)有人來(lái)索取贖金，而且船上沒(méi)有任何東西丟失，這不像是劫持。

　　2. 如果是易燃液體泄露，那應(yīng)該有味道，但是并沒(méi)有相關(guān)的記載。

　　3. 海員們經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，可以判斷出船還能航行一段時(shí)間，而且坐船去鄰近的島比坐救生艇要安全很多。

　　解題思路傳統(tǒng)四段式寫(xiě)作，每一段閱讀內(nèi)容+聽(tīng)力內(nèi)容。

　　參考范文The reading passage and the lecture both talk about what happened to people on the Mary Celeste. The reading passage mentions three theories, while the lecture maintains that none of them is convincing.

　　To begin with, according to the passage, the sailors on the Mary Celeste might be attacked and captured by pirates. However, the lecture indicates that no one ever came forward to demand money for the captain and the sailors of Mary Celeste, and almost nothing from the Mary Celeste was missing. Both of these show that the ship was not attacked by pirates.

　　Secondly, to quote the passage, the flammable liquid stored in the barrels might have leaked during the voyage, and for fear of explosion, the captain and the crew escaped to the lifeboat and encountered an accident. Unlike described in the passage, the lecturer argues that sailors who discovered the Mary Celeste did not make any records of the strong smell which could be caused by the leakage of the flammable liquid, which means that there is very little evidence that the barrels had actually leaked the liquid.

　　Finally, as the author argues, the captain and the crew were likely to use the lifeboat to reach the nearby island of Santa Maria, for they might have determined that the ship was in danger of sinking. Quite the contrary, the lecturer maintains that as experienced sailors, the captain and the crew members would have recognized that the ship was still able to travel for at least a few days, and they would use the ship instead of the lifeboat if they wanted to travel to a nearby island, because traveling on the ship was far safer.