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考題回憶Some people believe that friendships become stronger when friends enjoy good times together. Others believe that friendships become stronger when friends talk about their problems with each other and support each other. Which of these two approaches do you feel is most useful in helping make a friendship stronger?
解題思路立場(chǎng):同意第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)
原因:
1. 患難見(jiàn)真情,在困難中能夠支持的朋友更加真誠(chéng)相待,從而更有助于維持長(zhǎng)期友誼
2. 因?yàn)閷?duì)方的支持而感恩,如果以后對(duì)方遇到問(wèn)題,自己也會(huì)更加樂(lè)于去幫助朋友度過(guò)難關(guān),從而形成長(zhǎng)久的友誼,甚至成為一生的朋友
第一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)
讓步:
1. 一起度過(guò)開(kāi)心的時(shí)光屬于朋友之間快樂(lè)的分享,能夠增加彼此在一起的快樂(lè)回憶
2. 有助于培養(yǎng)共同的興趣愛(ài)好,以助于以后的關(guān)系發(fā)展
反駁:
但是,朋友之間友誼的增強(qiáng)更多的是看朋友在我們心中留下的印記,那些能夠在困難的時(shí)候彼此支持,相互扶持走出陰霾的朋友一定比只是可以和彼此開(kāi)心玩耍的朋友更加能夠給到彼此更多的心靈慰藉,從而更加能夠增進(jìn)長(zhǎng)久的友誼
參考范文范文:
Throughout people’s whole life, they may encounter many people and subsequently become friends with each other. Since friendship is one of the most valuable things in our life, we would all cherish these friends. But which approach is the most useful in helping making a friendship stronger? Some people contend enjoying good times together, whereas others point out that talking problems and supporting each other is more effective. Personally, I believe support is of vital significance to maintain a stronger friendship, and people should always try their utmost to help their friends to get through their difficulties.
There are two main reasons. First of all, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Those who can talk about problems with each other and support each other must be the most honest ones. With their company, it can be easier for us to pluck up the courage to deal with the misery in life, whether emotional or financial distress, thus contributing to a lifelong friendship. Additionally, people may feel grateful due to friends’ assistance, so if these friends encounter problems in their life, we would be more likely to help and support them, which can form a virtuous circle and is conducive to enhance the relationship with friends.
Admittedly, enjoying good times together is also another contributing factor. This is mainly because this period of time can also be seen as an opportunity for people to share, and this experience give each other happy memories. At the same time, spending good time together can also play a positive role in helping people to nurturing some common interests, which is also an important factor for friendship. However, it is only those assisting us who can leave a deep impression in our memories. Compared with those only having fun together, the friends we talk to when we have difficulties in life and those who support us always can give us more comfort and courage. This memory is enduring and even can last for our whole life. That is why I firmly believe talking problems with each other can be the most effective to strengthen the bond between friends.
To sum up, although spending good time with each other can benefit the relationship with friends, getting through difficulties with each other is a more useful method for a closer, stronger and even more lasting friendship.
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